Crazyfairy46

I love to write, the only good thing I'm good at :D

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Hleo

It is a really interesting plot, I could imagine it visually in my mind and even imagine the characters as if they were alive right before my eyes. I advice you to proofread it quickly for some punctuation mistakes, I'm sure if you go back and re-read you will easily be able to correct it. You did well with this one, it was really creative and nice to read.

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