DaniB301

Washington Heights, NY

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A promising start

I found the story to be quite engaging and as each chapter ended I was left wondering what would happen next. There were a lot of grammatical errors and some language issues that I’m sure can be addressed in editing. Overall I think this book is promising.

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Good concept

This is an early review based on the first few chapters, but I really enjoy the concept. The writing style and some grammar issues caused me to have to stop a few times, but maybe that’s something that can be addressed in rewrites and edits. Keep it up!

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Interesting

I don’t typically read stories of this genre, but I found this one interesting. I’m curious to see where it goes. I do think some words are used too much so maybe some synonyms in rewrites would be good. Overall good job

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