Danielle McCumiskey

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Thrilling!!

I actually discovered this book on wattpad but none the less was hooked from the very beginning!! The plot is fast and doesn't drag along like other books in this genre. It avoids your average cliche werewolf story and keeps you on your toes. There is no predicting the ending of this book because the various twists, turns and bumps in their story makes it impossible. This book deserves to be published and get more recognition!! 20/10 book!! (and that 20/10 wasn't a typo!)

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Bland

I wasn't sucked into the book when I first started reading it and mostly just kept saying what the fuck is this. Storyline didn't interest me and I found it quite an easy read. What I mean by easy read is that there wasn't much character development at the beginning, nothing really added up and it all just appeared to be put together hastily. Has good potential as the plot is unique but needs major editing and beefing out. Appears to be a first book although I have not checked. It's got a main plot and a subplot and I'm not sure which is which. All in all I was not drawn in and I am left confused. At Chapter 17 I feel as though I don't know the characters or the idea of the story. I get the whole Chandra shit but it just confuses me and irks me. I am disappointed.

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Immensely enjoyable

I will grant the 5 stars once the book is completed. It is extremely enjoyable and is a nice change from the cliche werewolf books I mostly read. It is entertaining and you feel part of the story. The characters personalities go well together and I don't find myself rolling my eyes at her submissive tendancies. Normally I would start to get pissed off but this book has the right amount of submission and dominance displayed. I look forward to an update.
-Danielle xx

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