DarkCranberries

A mechanical engineer who loves to create.

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Burned through it!

Easy to read, draws your interest, and I can't wait to see what else happens. I need to know more!
AND, i absolutely love the diversity. Beautiful.

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Vivid!

The tone is fresh, the imagery VERY clear and unique. Well crafted, can't wait to see more! Quick to read, I just burned through it :) looking forward to more updates!

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Enjoyable!

Right from the start, I am enjoying reading it. I haven't finished it, but I will continue reading, that's for sure. I absolutely love that this feels different than a lot of other books I've read, and maybe that's just your style, the setting, or whatever, regardless - I'm thoroughly pleased, and this one sticks out. Which is great!

Couple things though: there are some french typos, and some things that google translate just won't tell you, like context will tell you whether to use masculine or feminine indicators.
But it's really okay! It's a challenge to write with multi languages, and I commend you for it! It's really only little things, but it's the little things that will make your book excel.
I had a comment on the first chapter of a couple of the little errors, but I'm not going to nitpick them here.
Nice work! Will keep reading. And don't take out the french - I LOVE it!

All around, interesting plot, fascinating setting, and curious characters. You've gained a fan :)

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Imaginative!

Very fun! The tone is appropriately somber or light hearted, depending on who's speaking. The characters have defined voices, amusing dialogue, and the plot is entertaining.

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Wow!

A. I love, love, love the descriptions. It's so vivid.
B. I love, love, love the characters. I've read the first chapter, and I can't wait to read more.
C. The plot is enticing! Best believe I'll be coming back for more.
It feels real, vivid (I know I already said that, so note that I've said it twice now), and has so much potential. Excellent work author - you're killing it!

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