Strong characters, intense battles
This story is hugely enjoyable! The battles are intense and well written, and the Kniv tech is interesting. I really like how you set up the world on Nova and progressed to reveal the conditions on Earth, all while letting the main character grow and learn. The characters are unique and well thought out - I especially like Sara and Millie in their supporting roles. It is a fast-paced light read, while still being thought provoking. Your story-telling is fluid, just work on grammar, especially with dialogue, to help make it flow better. Great work, and I look forward to seeing more from you!
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