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Strong characters, intense battles
This story is hugely enjoyable! The battles are intense and well written, and the Kniv tech is interesting. I really like how you set up the world on Nova and progressed to reveal the conditions on Earth, all while letting the main character grow and learn. The characters are unique and well thought out - I especially like Sara and Millie in their supporting roles. It is a fast-paced light read, while still being thought provoking. Your story-telling is fluid, just work on grammar, especially with dialogue, to help make it flow better. Great work, and I look forward to seeing more from you!Read the story now
A fun read!
You did a great job establishing a unique setting, introducing the major characters, and getting right into some topnotch action. You caught my attention with Cross's apprehension and the conflict between Terrans and Novans. All of the characters are delightful with distinct personalities, and Kosu is particularly intriguing! My favorite parts are the suspenseful and captivating fight scenes in which you effortlessly depict the action and keep me engrossed in the story. I want to know more about Cross and Kosu and the world they come from and see how Banksy and Makina will grow and develop in the school. And more fights! I definitely recommend for an easy, entertaining read that will draw the reader into a epic world.Read the story now
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