Darth_tator

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So Great!

There were a few little grammar mistakes, but nothing too distracting. The plot was wonderfully created and the writing made me feel the emotions in my heart. Overall, great!

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Such a good read

This is a great story. I would recommend to anyone who wants their heart to be warmed in the best way!

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Not actually a full story

The only thing that I would change about this story is the label of 'complete'. It should let the reader know that this is only an excerpt and there is another place to find the full book.

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Such a great read

This is really a good book. It has twists and laughs and a few moments that made me want to cry. I really enjoyed reading this and felt like I was in Piccadilly with them.

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Great Book

I think that this is one of the best books I have read on this platform. I think that with a bit of editing, this book could be even better! Overall wonderful and anyone should read.

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