DayStorm

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Loved it!

This was really, really fascinating. Sitting through the entire story to see what little Dolly's "secret" was. The thing she kept to herself, holding close so that no one would ever know it. And then the ending! Strange how unforeseen that little bit of treachery was. I really wasn't expecting that, but I should have because such deceptions were common in these places.

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