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Good luck on your book.

If I may suggest, I think it will be better if you stick to one character or minimize the number of POV you introduce to your readers. That way they won't be spoon-fed and the thrill will be more impactful. And also, I notice some letters are missing like 'A ton', and sometimes spaces and capitalization like 'evony'. If I may suggest again, read the chapter over again before publishing it so we minimize the typo errors. Good luck! 😊

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