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Nice work

A simple but very well written story. The main characters are intriguing and have a depth to them often missing from new authors' work, and the secondary characters and plotlines give added interest to the world. I have to admit, when I read the description I was imagining some angsty, teenage misery with the girl constantly crying over her brother - boy, was I wrong. You've handled it well, without overdoing the emotional side of things. I also enjoyed the touches of humor you've thrown in, I'm still chuckling over "The peasants are revolting". Overall, a good story well told.

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