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Gorgeous
This was gorgeous. The whole thing. I was riveted through 'til the end. The twist was surprising and it caught me totally off guard. It was heartbreaking and thought provoking. Excellent job! You have some true talent!
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AMAZING!
This was incredible! I completely LOVED it! No answer as to what's happening to her. Genius :) I adore stories like that. Where you have to guess why and there is no explanation.What if somebody did find her? They wouldn't find anything. But she wasn't just disappearing physically, it was emotionally too. Withdrawing from everyone. Love, love, love.
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