Dhargor

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Mos Eisley

Very enjoyable read and great start to the main character.
The space port shoot out reminded me of Mos Eisley, though the transport ship is unlikely to do the Kessel run in less than 12 parsecs!
I was under the impression the main villain was another prisoner, perhaps I misinterpreted. So the raid on the ship whilst leaving seemed odd as how could another prisoner have tracked her so quickly and mobilized so many adversaries. That's assuming she was the target of course and not the new blond on the scene.
I guess I'll have to wait for the next exciting chapter!
Well done!
Jason

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