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I already bought this book in paper back form off Amazon and have been awaiting the third one's release. ._.
The plot is your typical "we must save the world" type of thing, but it's done up beautifully. A couple of the characters like Atrimalous, Dante, and Eva seem a bit overpowered, but I don't mind. I believe Eva could use a bit more personality as the one she currently has doesn't seem to suit her well enough. Atri seems more of the strong silent type. I also think that maybe she could have used a bit more flash backing to his past BEFORE he saves his little sister. o_o

Overall, despite what I thought could use work, I would have and did recommend this to my friends. I'm a huge fan of fantasy novels and this one definitely excites me.

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