DragonsBreathHat

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Loved It!

Good for her!

I loved reading this! Spent many a night staying up until 4am to get through all the chapters, zombie moding it during the day and it was worth it!

I plan to go back and read the Cullen stories (even tho Im not a huge fan of him -Team Ali all the way) Haha!

Thanks for the great read!

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Fenris angst!

I loved this so much. It was perfect. You captured Fenris' angst so well. I'm not a Hawks/Anders fan but I don't think the end could have gone any other way. Thank you for a great story!

LOVED this story. Heartbreaking and sad and deeply true to the characters.

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Thank you!

Thank you for a great story! Loved every minute of it, from the beginning of 'My Warden' to the very end of this one; it brought me lots of laughs, tears and near heart attacks, the latter of which are the most difficult to cause, in my opinion. Doesn't take much to amuse or sadden readers, but it takes some good writing to keep them on the edge of their seat, cursing themselves for not being able to read faster, which is what I found myself doing especially during the last scenes in the fortress. Although the flashback parts were difficult to read at times, it was only because it was so hard to pull back from the immediacy of our two heroes' quest, and Lana's struggle.

I felt that the characters were very natural and the story was true to the spirit of Dragon Age. Also I found myself chuckling out loud from the story's humor. And I just have to say that the epilogue was one of the best parts. It made me really excited to move on to the sequel. Thanks for sharing your work!

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