Drowned Redhead

Isole Beringer. Not yet professional so feedback is appreciated. Specialties include world building, character building, and language construction. This novella is turning into a novel.

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Very YA

Not that Young Adult isn't a bad thing, I just think starting in first person and then introducing angels immediately gives an impression of YA that's really hard to shake and, at least for me, YA has a bit of a bad rap.
Beautifully written though, and well developed.

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Town Set Aglow

A wonderful title to start, sets the mood if you will.
I like it. At first it felt a bit simple to me, but as I kept reading I realised it was a creation story, written simply in the style of passing a story the way creation stories are.
This is heartfelt and beautifully written and I feel honoured to have read it.

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