
Another great one!
So well written. You take your time to describe the characters /their thoughts without overdoing it. The wit and humour behind the dialogue, no repetition, clear, cohesive and consistent. All of it makes for an incredibly enjoyable read. Your characters come to life. Great short story!
Read the story nowA short series that became infinitely better with the 2nd book!
One of the best authors I’ve come across so far on this platform. Incredible story telling, character development and strong, female heroins with true grit, integrity and intellect. Well written, well thought out, good continuity and believable as believable as fiction can be. Loved reading this series - rarely find the 2nd books to outdo the 1st. But this was well executed. Made me love the main characters even more. There’s a real balance between the male and female leads. The supporting characters are equally endearing and funny.
Read the story nowWell written and strong characters
I thought the story flowed well, characters were well written and the story was credible. A wonderful story about 2 people who overcame adversity and horrible character from those who should have been closest and most concerned for their well being. Aria, Max, AJ are amazing friends. Riley is by far the most insecure, flip flop and flaky sister in the world. Self absorbed and selfish. At least her mother and Ethan stay consistently ugly in the story. Liam’s unconditional love is something we could all hope for in a partner... well done and look forward to reading more of your stories
Read the story nowIncomplete and full of glitches
It says it’s complete but it ends midway through story. Chapter 16/17 are duplicates. Chapter 13 is from an entirely different book! Story was interesting until all these issues. Makes for a disappointing experience
Read the story nowGreat story
I am enjoying it but conflicted by how 2 ppl can find love and forgiveness after so much hurt and betrayal. Bullying is obviously a complex behaviour - not black and white. But driving someone to suicide snd then forgiving- seems a stretch. Also maybe toxic?
Read the story nowGreat story!
The plot is well thought out. The characters well developed. Just some minor grammatical errors/ more typos and wrong words. Not sure if that is from rushed writing/ autocorrect or what. Wrong use of gender pronouns, but all in all great story so far. Just needs editing
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