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A good story with a few flaws
I really enjoyed this story, it flowed well enough that when I did notice grammatical and spelling errors, I didn't really care. There are a few of those, and some odd syntaxes, as well as some areas that go too deep in detail and others that skip it entirely.
My favorite scene was the explosion. It was obvious that he did his research there because that is exactly how those explosions affect people.
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