It's only been one chapter and already I'm enraptured! I love how the first few lines really hook the reader in, and I'm loving the writing style too! The story has a nice flow and a realistic plot, both of which I'm enjoying! I can see that it did take some work to write (which I totally understand), but let me just say: great job! I look forward to reading more of your works in the future!Read the story now
I've been sitting here for 4 hours
Okay so I just read the whole thing in one sitting.
I'm also crying.
Reading this story was honestly a life-changing experience for me. It was beautiful, the character's were amazing, the writing was fantastic-- oh man, I've never wanted to applaud a story so much! The only flaw I could really find was the occasional spelling mistake, but even then those were easily overlooked.
Now if you'll excuse me I'm gonna go read the whole thing again
I must say, I enjoyed your story very much! The suspense was amazingly preserved and the plot flowed smoothly!
I really liked the way this was written and especially enjoyed the concluding sentence as well.
Amazing job, keep up the good work!
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