Ella

London

Hey i'm Ella, I am a 16 year old aspiring author with a dream of publishing a book one day. You can find me on Wattpad @ellzx13

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An eye-opening, gripping read

I never knew much about Muslim culture, so this was a really eye-opening read. Your writing flows very nicely and I was hooked from the start. The relationship between Darren and Aisha is mesmerising and I just love reading about them. I urge you to continue writing, I will definitely read it. Although I disagree with the MC's views of converting Darren, it was an amazing read. I really sympathised with the MC and it shone a light on the struggles that Muslim teenagers (and all Muslims) face in society. I applaud you for writing this. And I recommend everyone to read it.

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Lives up to the promise of Magic

Even though it’s only the first chapter, the author has set the tone for the story and delivers on the magic it promises. The writing style is beautiful, with breathtaking descriptions and stunning imagery. The perfect read for fantasy lovers. I love the slight hints between good and evil, it gives the story some density, and makes me want to follow the two sisters journey. The author portrays emotion really well. A great read already. I’m looking forward to see where this heads. Well done! X

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A promising start

A very promising start. The author has a clear writing style that flows nicely, and a great way to begin a story is with a secret which you have done. The prologue has made me curious as to want is going to happen in this characters life. The author gave just enough away to grip my attention but still left a major plot thickener uncovered. I want to know what will happen on the Princess' 18th birthday. I can't wait to see how these character's progress. Keep writing, this has the potential to be a great read! Give this book a go, you never know, it might be a gem.

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A Heartbreaking Read

If you are after a quick read that makes you feel something, this book is your go to. The chapters were short but powerful, and you really know how to make a reader sympathize with your characters. It was mysterious, and in ways, I wish I knew more about why the best friend changed. It was a heartbreaking read, very intense and also beautiful. I really enjoyed it and stayed hooked until the end! Although I love the title of the book, I feel as if it is slightly misleading as I thought she was going to jump from a cliff. I can understand that it could be metaphorical though. All in all, well done! xx

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One chapter in and I am in love

Okay so to start, you've got yourself a permanent reader.

Everything about this book hooks me. It's original, mysterious, and sexy. Both the main character and Myth are really well built and interesting. The main character is cocky but likeable and I can't help but be drawn to him like he is drawn to Myth. And Myth is already a strong, determined and fierce character who does things her way. She is the perfect character to drive a story forward in the best way!

Already, the relationship between the two characters is electrifying. You are so talented and your writing style is stunning. This is a gorgeous book which I will be reading more of. Well done!

If you haven't read this book you are missing out. You won't be disappointed. This book does Fantasy proud.

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Short and sweet

A quick and pretty read. I like how secretive the letters seem, it makes it a very personal. I can already feel the emotional turmoil between the characters. You have a nice writing style which reads well with just enough description for a book like this. I urge you to keep on wiring and maybe make the letters a bit longer. I want more!! With work this could turn into something really good.

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Unique

This a really unique and interesting idea. If I’m honest it’s not for me, I’m a sucker for a good description and I find the format of the book quite hard to read however I applaud you for your execution. If you enjoy a quick, light hearted and fresh read then this ones for you.

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Such a unique plot!

The author is clearly very creative, the plot for the book is original and gripping. The author portrays the characters well and has a smooth writing style which progresses throughout. Although I am not very far into the story, I can tell that this book has huge potential and it is a must read if you are looking for something different and futuristic!

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You can't help but love it.

Reading comes easy with this book. In each chapter, Evelyn and Ryan's story unravels and my eyes got glued to the screen of my laptop. The author has a writing style that allows everything to flow perfectly.
If you are looking for an easy, beautiful, calming and enchanting read, then read this book!
One thing I have to point out though is the overuse of comma's so be careful on that, but otherwise I love this book and will definitely be reading more when I get the time.

This author deserves your attention!!!

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Heartfelt and Stunningly written

Never Forget The Name Ethan is worth every second of the time you spend reading it.

The first thing that caught my attention was the simple, but beautiful cover. The next thing was the stunning way in which the author writes. It is wrote like a published book, professionally and perfectly. There are some grammar mistakes but the gripping plot makes the punctuation irrelevant.

Never Forget The Name Ethan is heartfelt, emotional, beautiful and really captures what it is like to be in love and to break up with the person you love. Both main characters are amazing, and the relationship between them is stunning.

The writer describes everything really well, and there wasn't a second in which I wanted to be reading something else. Please read this book! It has the potential to go far. And to the author: I beg you to update, because I am hooked!

5 stars!!!!

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Early days but it's a story with potential!

It's hard to base too much of an opinion off the first two chapters, however I can tell that you are building up an interesting plot. The only main problem that I have is the punctuation, there are some words misplaced which interrupts the flow of the story. You have a clear outline for strong characters, just make sure the protagonists thoughts are clearly outlined because I found myself getting confused at times with the overuse of Rhetorical Questions.

Overall though, this story has potential, so carry on writing. It is an interesting book with a beautiful cover! Whoever see's this, give this book a chance!

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Unique and Captivating

This book is definitely worth a read! It flows nicely, with well built characters and an interesting plot. It is mysterious and unique, always leaving you second guessing. The protagonist is a strong female character who is very likeable and the whole story creates a nice atmosphere, as if you are living in the world that the author has created. If you come across this book, don't ignore it, read it and I promise you won't be disappointed! Xx

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Fast paced and Thrilling

The authors writing style is gripping and fast paced, making for an exciting read. This story strives on darkness and revenge, and the main characters feelings are made very obvious. The author has a poetic style of writing which is refreshing and thought provoking. The vocabulary used is off the charts, and the tone is cleverly kept throughout. At times I found it a bit too repetitive, but other than that I look forward to seeing where this story goes.

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