Elmirafh

Reading and writing are my favorite hobbies. I write stories to have a break from reality and let my imagination run wild. Hope you enjoy reading them too ^.^

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Crazy Rich Kids

The premise was good. It's an interesting take over a mental institution with its patients.
The title is a little misleading, at first glance you think it's about a bunch of rich high school students, but the actual story is pretty different.
I like how the atmosphere is shown as a friendly place, everyone is warm and welcoming, The flow is really good and easy to read. And the descriptions are good, and the story is enjoyable. I can't wait to continue reading!

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Great story!

The plot is really unique. I like how the story starts, it's right from the most important and life changing moment for the MC.
The flow is really good, but I would suggest you to work on description. To not announce all the important characters all at once. Give bits and pieces of information as you go on. Also use different yet unique opportunity to describe their appearances. Other than that, the writing style is good and it's really easy and enjoyable to read.

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Amazing so far

So I've read and seen a lot of stories where it's about a girl being forcefully married to a rich guy, as famous as that trope might be, the author of this story has given it a very interesting twist. The girl is already married and has to spend a night with a rich guy (something I had not seen before).
The story conveys emotions and it's very well written. The flow is really good and the descriptions are vivid, I personally really enjoyed reading it, and will probably read it till the end.

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