I am a 27 year old, aspiring author from North East England.

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Different and interesting!

A really interesting story so far. I did find it confusing when it flipped between different narrators, so maybe signposting that would help. But it really drew me in and after some more editing, I think this could be a really good read. Well done and keep up the good work!

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