Emily Tanya

Surprising Twists

I love the romance elements of the story and twists about the characters and its connection with The Ballad of Crystl. I've slowly started to learn about the Verse and its significance to the entire series. It was definitely fun to know that Mr. Shin was able to create the Incubus Hunt out of your series. Overall, your story should've been an anime!

5 Stars

Ok, after reading everything, this is the outline of what I noticed.
> There is a first act and a second act. but the third act is missing. My guess is since this is a series, the third act might in one of the next works.
> The character is well-developed as well as the supporting characters.
> The setting is dark and gloomy which is good since the tone of the story is also dark.
> The style of writing is really made for young adult audiences. The humor is also there and the character is not really the typical male protagonist who doesn't care about love or anything.
> There is politics and hierarchy involved which makes the story interesting.
> Overall, I want to read the next sequels of this work. Good work!

Plot with Porn and not Vice Versa!

Two authors, two very different writing styles. I was able to contact the Japanese author on Facebook and he said that G C Fer (Filipino) was behind the Fantasy, Action, and Adventure part while he (Shinku) was behind the Erotica, Dark Romance, and Suspense-Thriller part. The two authors got this right mix of ideas and that the story indeed is engaging having a lot of surprising twists and turns. The story part gets deeper and it has a full history behind it that makes me want to find the answers in the sequel because it gives you a better idea about the what if scenario type of events it's just wow. The idea themselves are overwhelmingly scary, in my opinion that it makes me feel like "WHAT IF" it were real? The erotica is so immersive that it triggers glands to secrete hormones that would send messages to the brain giving off the sense of pleasure to say the least and that the author deliberately "sometimes" would leave you hanging like "What the hell happened next?!" The world-building is just WOW. G C Fer made the world and Shinku took some elements of the original unpublished story into this one. As for the punctuation and grammar, I'm not really critical into those matters since the placement of ellipses indicate how people would actually talk "INFORMALLY" and "IMPROMPTU". The comedic play and interaction with the characters are fantastic that the plot twists were hidden in plain sight. I want to read more and I want to see an animated version of this one in the future. I would definitely recommend this to my friends.