Emma

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13 My name’s Emma “Don’t prepare me for the world. Prepare the world for me.” Baking Swimming Ocean Besties: Neko Wolf, Redlion57, Moonlightshine, and jordandemark38

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So good, but....

Ok so I haven’t finished this story yet, simply because it is not finished yet but here r a few things. I love the plot of this story so far with Colton trying to help Audra have the best 4 months of her life, but the thing I don’t enjoy as much is how quick it’s moving. What I mean is literally in the 1st chapter they already start dating. I’m not hating on that, but I feel maybe it would be better to let us know Colton and Audra as a person before meeting them as a couple. Besides that it is so so so so so so so so so so good and I am hooked! I highly recommend!

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AMAZING!

I love this book so far! I can’t wait for more updates! The plot is so great and has a deep meaning to it. I also like how it raises awareness of bullying. I love the writing style that the author uses because it seems like Allison is talking to you. One thing that is wrong is there are some punctuation and spelling errors also I’m confused because is her name Alice or Allison? But otherwise it is so good! And I recommend it and I can’t wait for more!!!

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