Eve_N2020

Author, Singer and Prominent Noodle from the UK. Originally Made in France. I'm a lover and a fighter and a reader and writer. Whatever you need, I'll support you.

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Speechless...

Although I haven't finished it yet (though I am rushing through it because I cannot allow myself to stray from this wonderful story), I had to do this review. People need to read this story. It is brilliant and the plot is fantastically driven. What begins as a revenge plot, which is certatinly well-founded and allows me to root for this amazing character of Hope, becomes a story about two people mending each others woes.

Although, I do believe Hope's revenge is completely justified.

Your characters are interesting and nuanced and I cannot help but adore Hope and I would love to fight alongside her to ensure she achieves happiness.

This is the pinnacle of revenge/adventure stories and I love it so much.

:)

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Fangtastic (I shouldn't be allowed a keyboard)

Sorry about the pun.

A wonderful, chilling and well-researched dichotomy on one of the most beloved and feared creatures and their history. I particularly enjoyed your section on Anne Rice. Your style is nuanced and terrific.

All together, a brilliant examination of history and folklore.

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Heart-breaking and fasrt-paced

Ethan is a very complex and interesting character that I cannot help but pity every time we experience a new memory. The way you write these flashbacks is fast-paced without being rushed and your words flow with such excellence that I must read more ASAP. You are a wonderful writer.

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A wonderful journey through a fabulous world

Your narrative voice is rich in wonder and intrigue, pulling me in from the very beginning. You are a born storyteller - I could not tear my eyes away.

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Gripping.

Brilliant plot which sunk its talons into me and has not let me go. Nuanced, complex characters which you find yourself rooting for from the very beginning - Dalton is especially interesting. You create suspense as easily as one would breathe and your writing is wonderfully descriptive without ruining the pace.

Can't wait to read more from you.

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Amazing.

Brilliant story, nuanced characters and a wonderful emotional journey.

How did you get this published as an eBook? Did you self-publish or was there an agent involved (I'm just curious and I'm glad, if there is an agent, that someone recognised your beautiful writing).

This story is - if you'll excuse the pun - haunting, and amazing and I cannot wait to read more from you.

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Sweet and inspirational

The beginning of this story is amazing. It is life-affirming and reminds you of what it means to be a child with loving parents and a dream. Mini-Hannah is soo cute (please tell there's a happy ending!)

Your style is nuanced and this story is beautifully written.

Never stop writing!!!

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AMAZING!

You have conquered the beast of Third Person POV. I have been sucked into this magical world of tension and drama. Your style is beautiful and fantastical.

This story is brilliant. :)

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...*sniff*...*blub*...

I'm not crying. *Stuffs tissue in face*

This was heart-breaking and beautiful and gave perfect insight into House's inner dialogue as beneath the sarcastic reasoning machine, there is an emotional man who is going to lose his best friend.

You've made me want to watch House all over again from start to finish. Your style is bittersweet and I adore it.

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Keep writing!

Interesting characters and a plot with many threads. I like your style and you keep your readers hooked from the first word.

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I want to live in this world!

I love this story so far. I want to be James and be sucked into a world of intrigue. Your style is intense and very resolved. You write with conviction, more than many professional authors. This is brilliant. Cannot wait to continue reading.

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I 'wolfed' this story down

Excuse me for the terrible pun.

This story is absolutely amazing: fast-paced when it needs to be but it slows down enough for effective character development. The narrative voice you've created for Hayley is strong and amazingly written - I can almost see her fear and anxiety through the page.

Luke is also a complex character and I admire the way you allows us to change our opinions of each character as the story progresses. This is brilliant.

You are a FAB writer and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise.

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Essential Reading!

While I do not like Erotica as a genre, though I do appreciate its importance, this story is quintessential in exploring an interesting sensual narrative with immersive settings, fantastic dialogue, and nuanced characters. I loved the descriptive passage in the first chapter, especially the presence of the foxfire.

If you want brilliant writing which will entertain you to no end, look no further than this wonderful story of desire.

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Just Wow.

Just wow. An amazing story, wonderful and magical descriptive passages and characters which I found myself rooting for instantly. Brooke is interesting, Johnny is fun and I feel like I could really get inside the head of Nessa.

As a fan of the bildungsroman novel, this story is a testament to the wonders of growing up and it is a beautiful tale, well paced and brimming with adventure.

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Brilliant!

If you want a writer who is a master of emotions, look no further than this story. You craft excellent emotive passages, capturing the height of human desire.

As a character, Valentina is amazing and someone we'd all love to bond with ourselves.

You are a wonderful writer and I hope we see even more of Valentina and the heart-wrenching and interesting world you've created.

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Wow...

As per usual, I am speechless. Your writing is beautifully crafted, your dialogue is expertly woven and your characters are worth rooting for. Your style is brilliantly paced, so there is no chance of escaping your story without the heart of the reader belonging to your narrative voice.

You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what you write next.

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Heart-in-the-mouth-amazing

This story is so brilliant it hurts to read it - to read of poor Evie's hardships and the horrors she faces. Your characters are nuanced and complex, and my emotions shifted in every chapter. You have created a wonderful and heart-breaking story I cannot bring myself to stop reading.

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AMAZING!

As a lover of fantasy and magical worlds, I couldn't stop smiling when I read this story. It is brilliant, the characters are perfectly drafted and the story is well-paced - not too fast, but not too slow either.

You are a fantastic writer - you've created a world which is wondrous and intriguing.

Please, keep writing.

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So sweet!

This is just the story everyone needs: a beautifully written tale of finding love once thought lost.

Jake is interesting and his narrative voice is perfect - towing the line between sensitive boy trying to reclaim his childhood friend, and a suave womanizer. Aubree is so sweet I think my teeth might rot.

This story is lovely and beautiful.

You are a wonderful writer, who takes the reader on an emotional journey full of love and bittersweet partings. Brilliant.

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Interesting.

I really enjoyed this story - I can see the adventure brewing. The flow as well as the pacing is amazingly written.

Aria is an interesting character, though I hope the horror of her parents' death catches up with her in the following chapters as her reaction seemed to be glossed over a little, although I think it was just in the moment shock.

I love the world; it is one I'd enjoy to enter myself. You really have a way with characterisation and fantastical story telling.

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I smell action and fantasy... Yey!

I love the opening line for starters - GreyMoon is an interesting character to begin with. It's like the better wolf version of Warrior Cats that I never knew I needed - I love it.

The sense of impending action and adventure is wonderful and your style is honed and intriguing,.

I cannot wait to read more of your work.

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Brilliant.

This is wonderfully suspenseful and darkly humorous. Your characters are complex and nuanced and I can't wait to read more of this story.

You are a brilliant writer. :)

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Lovely story!

I love the sweet beginning and the dramatic emotional twists and turns.

Your characters are interesting and well written and I can imagine this be a good TV Show.

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Wow...

This is brilliant. The plot, the forbidden love (one of my favourite tropes), the way you describe the beating of the wings. Your narrative voice is *chef's kiss* perfection.

You are one damn amazing writer.

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Amazing!

My eyes almost popped out of my sockets because your writing makes me read so fast! I need to know what happens. Your prose is suspenseful and well-paced. I'm really interested in the character of Phoebe and your epic characterisation. I also love the way you convey dialogue; it is beautifully haunting.

You are a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read more of your work.

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Brilliant.

An amazing plot, interesting and complex characters and your style is suspense writing at its finest. Just wow!

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Need tissues! So good.

This is brilliant and the fact that it is based on real life situations breaks my heart. If you ever want to talk, I'm here. I suppose writing really is the best medicine to these situations. I understand you and believe me, I know how you.

Your writing is magical and bittersweet - amazing style. Please write more. If anyone deserves the recognition, it's you.

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FAB!

I love the complexities of Damian as a character. You are an amazing writer and I love your style as you carefully and judiciously build your magical world of action and desire.

I've got chills!

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Love this!

You have shattered my heart into a thousand pieces. This is brilliant and beautiful and amazing and heart-wrenching. Your style is amazing and wonderful.

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AWESOME!

I love the way you develop these characters - more so than a television script ever could. Your style is amazing; it flows with emotional twists and turns. Brilliant - as always.

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Brillaint!

This is a gripping story. I love this so far. Your characters are complex and interesting and their motives are intriguing. I love this and I can't stop reading.

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Wow!

I am stunned. Your characters are complex and nuanced. The story unravels before your eyes and it is full of gnarled twists and turns. You keep your readers - quite literally - on the edge of their seats constantly throughout.

I love this. You're writing is brilliant.

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Just Wow!

The world-building, the nuanced characters, your structure. This book is a maze of twists and turns, which runs gracefully alongside brilliantly described action and character development.

This is amazing!

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This is beautiful.

A wonderful story; it resonates with the soul and shakes the foundations of the heart. Better yet, it hurts when you read it. You allow your readers to go on an emotional journey of their own, as well as experiencing the pain of the characters.

This is innovative and interesting - although I would expect no less from your writing. You are brilliant! I loved it.

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So Mysterious!

I am always excited to read your narratives. They are nuanced, the characters are intriguing, and the plots and suspenseful. You craft your chapters with exquisite grace, without losing that sense of suspense. This story is brilliant and I can't wait to read more of your books.

Amazing!

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Yay! TVD!

TVD + Your Writing is a formidable combination. As soon as I saw the names 'Stefan' and 'Damon' I thought 'Sing me up for this!'

Your writing is always so nuanced and it makes my heart wrench, or beat faster depending on the plot. I loved your introduction - with the boarding house, and Damon being Damon as per usual. It was really comforting to read this as well as intriguing. You expertly slow the story down when you want us to pay attention to details. I really enjoyed it.

Thank you for writing this.

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Brilliant!

I could feel myself being pulled into the story, lying on a mattress alongside Chloe, staring at the stars. Your world-building is magical and effective. I love the dialogue and the way you manage to draw the story from the shores of normality to uneasiness; it gave me goose bumps. Love this story.

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I am hooked!

The style of this story haunted me from the very beginning. I love how you begin this first chapter with poetry - its concision gives the prose an eerie feel and yet you're automatically inclined to read more.

Amazing!

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I am intriguied!

I really enjoyed reading this; it has such magnificent air to it. The writing style gives off mysterious vibes, while the simple language gives a sense of intrigue as well as foreboding. What will happen?

You have a gift with words and dialogue especially. I cannot wait to read more,

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Excellent!

I couldn't put my laptop down. This is amazing. I love the concept, and Dean's voice is wonderful. You've created a narrative that is simultaneously intriguing yet captures the concision of a down-to-earth character who actually emulates a human being unlike many popular novels, The primary interrogative of, ''Why did I disappear?' is fantastic - it hooked me from the first word. Can't wait to read more (who needs to sleep when you have this?!)

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Ouch! This is amazing!

This hurt my heart; it was so good. I've just lost someone recently so this really resonated. I love the story, the style - you have a way of hooking people in so quickly. You're like a masterful fisherman with a pen instead of bait. You and your stories are brilliant!

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