Author, Do Not Be Discouraged
This book was too fast paced. Jamie and Adrian went from girlfriend/boyfriend to s*x partners then to husband and wife in a matter of 40+ chapters. Author kept changing Jamie's name to Rochelle and Jamie's daughter's name from Lilly to Delilah which was really confusing. Chapters were short and not much thought went into them. The plot had some major issues. For example the last chapter states that Adrian and Jamie got married and had a baby and that's it. There's no explanation as to how they had a baby in two months when in reality it should be nine months. I also think many things in the book should've had an explanation, like Adrian breaking up with Jamie all the time or why he wasn't the one to tell Jame that he had kids to two different women. The characters were not developed well, I felt like I was given the whole bad-boy-meets-good-girl vibes. Overall, I feel like this book has potential and if it were to be rewritten, the chapters made longer and the book had more chapters then it would've reached the hearts of true readers. My review was not to discourage the author, in fact, I applaud you for sharing your books with us. The way it is now is good and you have done well, so good job.
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