Nerdbird

I usually write poems and short stories in note books. This is my first time putting out books for everyone to see.

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Great so far.

This is an excellent WIP, kudos to the author for creativity and the ability to immerse the reader. The only thing I would add would be a bit more detail on the first teacher. Also separating the thoughts from the other text could really highlight her thoughts. Otherwise, well written. Nice job author, keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more.

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I applaud you author

This story line is absolutely captivating. Theres always a twist around every corner that I wasnt expecting. You continue to thrill with the adventures. And melt my heart with every ship formed. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.

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Very good

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. It seemed to start slow, but picked up pace quickly. The plot is clear, and the hint of romance is just right. Keep up the writing, I'm excited to learn more of this world.

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Sunshine

I absolutely adore the premise of this story. The heartwrenching fears really resonated with me. Attention to detail makes the plot and characters believable. The flow of writing is a bit rough, and the English used is a bit broken. With some practice and guidance, you'll have a beautiful tale. Overall, I'm definitely interested in reading more, keep up the good work author! Practice makes perfect.

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Intriguing

So far this story is intriguing. I love the four brothers and their unique personality traits, i think it's a great mash up. The quirky nicknames had me giggling. I'm interested in reading more of this! Detailed and well played out with quite a few characters being thrown in all at once. Although I don't understand all the mannerisms, im able to figure what they mean. Nice job author! Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more.

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Another great chapter

Omg! So excited about the rest of their date!! Aiden's personality of classy gentleman with a hint of goofball, Had me giggling so much ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคค excellent continuation of the plot, your punctuation is on point, and only saw a few spelling errors. Nice work author ๐Ÿ’œ keep it up.

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Immersive reading

This book has captured my mind and thrown it into an alternative dimension, great detail and character personality portrayals. Keep it up! I'm excited to read more ๐Ÿ˜

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Loving this so far

I am very intrigued with this story because of its twist in the plot line. I'm interested to see how this main characters personality arcs. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read some more.

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Ooo la la

Clear plot line, and great build up to the first six scene. I am impressed with how hard you hit me in the feels. I almost cried for real when she ran away from him.

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Well done

I love this series. It keeps me wanting more, and I can't put it down

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Nice job

Well done again dear author. You have successfully captured me again with your amazing writing. It pulls at my heart strings, and leaves me wanting g more. They way you describe everything paints a clear picture in the mind. This has a very interesting plot twist, and I'm excited to read more! Keep up the good work!

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Great book!

Absolutely love this book, and the whole series. But you could use a proofreader. All in all very well versed and detailed! You have a way of describing the characters emotions and feelings, in a way that makes the reader feel them too.Keep up the amazing work!

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