Wow! I was hooked by the end of the first chapter. The plot is a breath of fresh air, these days so many novels end up with similar plot lines and all that differs is how it unfolds, but this is different. The ideas are fresh and original with the writer drawing from the standards and making it completely their own.
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I love Priscilla's character so far, she seems unique with a mind of her own which a great! I think out of the ones introduced so far, she's my favorite and I can't wait to see her character and personality development throughout the story as it continues.
The only thing I can critique is some minor grammar flaws. Some of the sentences are far too long which makes them difficult to read, so consider breaking up the longer ones and making full use of commas, full stops, semicolons etc, to make these easier for the reader to absorb. Grammarly really helps me,
Other than that, it is well written and the plot is solid, and I cannot wait for future updates to see how this all unfolds! Keep up the amazing work! I love the cover too, it looks very professional!