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Needs work, but has a good foundation!

I like the idea behind this novel! I think with a bit more fleshing out it could be really interesting. Right away you feel sympathy for the main character. The two main questions I had while reading it were "Why do they hate her so much?" and "What's going to happen to her next? Will she end up ok?". Grammatically, there are a few spelling errors, and a ton of run-on sentences. The description you give for the novel seems a bit generic personally- maybe try and use more dramatic words to try and draw the reader in?

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