Fatfinger

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Love it!

I'm extremely impressed with this. It's very imaginative and well written. I thought I had a good idea as to where you might be going with it after chapter two, but I was wrong. Still enjoyed it though and have no idea where it goes from here, but I hope there is much more. I can't wait to find out! Thanks for submitting!

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Mindless....Great story!

I completely agree with the first review. The pace is perfect and really keeps the story careening toward it's excellent ending. The somewhat unusual writing style briefly lost me a few times, but it was worth it!

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Second Sight

Definitely intriguing enough to make once anxious to read the next installment. I thought the field, and playing, and little boy might have been explained already, but that's not necessary. Maybe next chapter. Something to look forward to.

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