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A half orphan

(Really quick chapters 6 and 7 are the same chapter.) I thought 'A Half Orphan' was a very unique story. You did a fantastic job developing the romance between Ash and biju. Giving renu her own stuggle in the story was a great touch. It's a interesting take on love and tradition. You have a really good story.

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Edge of Humanity

So I will admit that I never got on board with the vampire craze Twilight started. That being said, I really enjoyed reading this (I did have to look up what flashing was. I assumed it was some form of teleporting/moving ridiculously fast, but just wanted to be sure. The dialogue is believable and even with the jumping time periods in the book, it was fairly easy to follow. Clay is a dynamic and interesting character. The one thing I loved the most about "Edge" was the way you developed the relationship between Hope and Clay. I like how you didn't have them fall head over heels in love with each other and kept the story mostly about Clay struggling with his humanity. Great Job :)

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Elementals

A fun and exciting fantasy story. Rosalie might be my new favorite person:) She's a strong and hysterical character. You write great action scenes (thought some of the dialogue in the action scenes feels a little forced) and the story had a fast pace that kept me glued to the page. Your cliffhanger at the end made me want more.

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The Kingdom of Archer Book I: Bloom

This was a very unique story with a lot of beautiful, vivid imagery. I enjoyed reading the book from both Parker and Lyric's perspective (though that along with how the dream sequences were set up made the first few chapters a little hard to follow.) Besides that and a few typos here and there, as someone who doesn't normally gravitate towards fantasy romance novels, I found this to be an excellent read. Can't wait for 'Rise'!

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Hleo

This was an amazing story. Becky Weller's writing style reels you in and makes you want to keep reading page after page. I found myself on the edge of my seat, excited to find out where the twists and turns were going to lead to and cracking up at the perfectly timed humor throughout the book. To put it simply, you are going to fall in love with this book. Can't wait to read more from you Becky!

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