Edge of Humanity
So I will admit that I never got on board with the vampire craze Twilight started. That being said, I really enjoyed reading this (I did have to look up what flashing was. I assumed it was some form of teleporting/moving ridiculously fast, but just wanted to be sure. The dialogue is believable and even with the jumping time periods in the book, it was fairly easy to follow. Clay is a dynamic and interesting character. The one thing I loved the most about "Edge" was the way you developed the relationship between Hope and Clay. I like how you didn't have them fall head over heels in love with each other and kept the story mostly about Clay struggling with his humanity. Great Job :)
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