Felicy Kiranadi

@Fizzle2015

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Sweet Memory Lane,Poems & Letters

I have a few suggestions for this collection. 1.Double check spelling- Spellchecker can be annoying and it has changed a few of your words to the wrong thing 2.I know this poetry and sometimes it doesn't apply to normal punctuation rules, but I'd still re-read to correct some of the more confusing sentances. Other than that good job. P.s. FYI didn't give plot many stars in my review because this doesn't have a overall plot (though some of the updates so a bit) not because I thought it was bad.

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Still amazing

Just as good as the first. P.S. Devin is the best

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Just read it

I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!!!!😍😍😍 I've read this book before and its amazing so naturally I'm of to read it again. Thank you author for creating such a masterpiece.

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Agents of the CIA

Overall I like how you write unfortunately the plot is a bit all over the place and the story line goes way too fast to be realistic. I like the idea though so, I will continue to read.

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