Florencia Bravo

Orange County

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Great Start!

I really love the plot line to this, the whole obsession and infatuation reminds me a little of “You” by Caroline Kepnes (in a good way) but this is completely original. I think that perhaps getting an editor could help you out a lot as there are quite a few grammatical errors that make some of the sentences confusing to read. I will continue to read and can’t wait to see where it goes!

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Loving it so far!

I have finished reading this yet, but I will update this review once I have. I find the story very interesting so far and want to know more about these character's pasts and how they are connected. I really like the descriptions of the story so far, it definitely adds life to the novel. There were a couple of parts that seemed stiff or awkward but I myself have trouble with this in my own sentence structure as well. Other than a couple of grammatical errors, I am greatly enjoying the story so far!

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I need more!

Wow, I am currently reading this and will be updating this review when I have finished, but so far I am in love it! I love the writing style and plot, this is a very professional novel and you can tell the author has put a lot of time and thought into this. I should being doing homework now but I am finding it so hard to put this down! I saw some critiques about the longer than usual prologue but it was so fascinating to read I did not mind the length at all. I cannot wait to see the story goes!

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Great retelling of a classic

Wow for a story that has been rewritten so many times over you made me feel like I was reading a completely new story! I think perhaps going over it once or twice to fix a couple of grammatical errors could greatly improve the novel as whole. Other than that, I loved it!

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Can’t wait to read more!

I usually don’t like novels with supernatural aspects but this has completely changed my mine! I loved the story it was completely addicting! I can’t wait to read more!!! My only suggestion would be to lengthen the chapters a bit more but some writers and readers prefer shorter chapters so that’s up to you!

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