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Alpha Thanatos

The overall plot was a bit jumpy. Although it did follow one path, it got jumbled and mixed up in places sometimes making it hard to follow. There were many spelling mistakes which made it more difficult to read/follow. Sometimes it felt as though earlier references to things such as the protagonists childhood were forgotten so it changed throughout the book. In my opinion, it needs quite a bit of editing.

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