An Awesome Poem, that had me smiling in all the right places, I captured the essence of what you were saying perfectly and I don't usually get poetry but it had me nodding in agreement.
Look forward to reading more of your work.
Interesting concept, I am really hoping there is more to this, I would love to see what happens next.
Would suggest you go back and edit first chapter a few minor spelling mistakes need correcting. but the story itself is awesome. look forward to reading more.
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