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Love!
I love the fact that you can really clearly distinguish the characters voices. I also love that the character development is fully fleshed out. They feel like their own people, with their own complexities that sometimes get missed or glossed over in other stories. The plot lines are coherent and merge seamlessly. It all feels very organic and I didn’t have any moments of being ‘thrown out’ of the story, which is nice.
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