Gregor Kossmann

Comes from three countries, and speaks six languages. Interested in debate, politics, and government.

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Great Potential!

I really enjoyed the start and I'm keen on reading more once it comes out. For now I'm obviously rather confused about the plot, and there are a few grammatical mistakes throughout. Nonetheless, I am optimistic about this book and I truly see it developing to be something great!

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Captivating!

Absolutely loved your story. Very vivid imagery; I could feel as if I was there. What you have so far is good to be a short story in itself! Keep writing, and if this is truly a work in progress, then I can't wait to read the rest of it.

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Wow!

Really liked your story! It's a bit long for my liking so I didn't manage to read all 48 chapters but I read quite a lot of them and they're very engrossing. I spent hours on end just reading this and it's honestly really amazing. Just, as I said, a bit too long for my liking, but otherwise great!

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Interesting...

Hey, I just read your poems and I love them a lot. It's a very unique way of writing, like I've never seen before. I love poem 11 especially! I also think that your explanations are helpful because initially i don't quite udnerstand your poems but once you explain it I learn to appreciate them properly. However, what I would say, though, is it would be more comfortable to read if the sentences/lines were a bit longer. It can often feel rather awkward when reading them in my head like there is always this break at the end of the line. Just something to look out for. Otherwise great poems!

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