Hero Productions
@HP41
I'm a bum and I post whenever, don't expect too much from me. I do love to write and I think my stories are pretty good, so stick around!
Overall Rating
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Pretty good.
From what I've read (5 chapters) It's a pretty good story. There are a few things that I pointed out that are a little confusing such as the setting but overall the it a good read. I recommend this for people who like suspence, it leaves you with a lot of questions at the end of each chapter that keeps you on the edge of your seat.
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