Han

I love writing and reading other people's works. That aside, English is not my native language so my apologies in advance!

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Good job!

I've never been a fan of reading this kind of plot but surprisingly enough, the book kept me in its little hands, pushing me to continue reading.

Although, there are some grammatical and punctuational errors, it's still readable and as for the POVs written when switching characters, it's a good addition. I do feel like the characters are moving too fast, though. 😂

But that aside, it's a good book! A little tweaking and I'm sure it'll be a polished diamond! 👍

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Wonderful <3

To be frank, I didn't expect I'd be THIS hooked to a story to the point that I forget to leave a comment on each chapter. Take it as me being too immersed in your story that I actually forget to make my presence known until I'm at the latest chapter.

One. I love how descriptive you are when it comes to what each character is doing. It helps a lot with the imagery.

Two. The emotions of the characters are properly conveyed and although there are some punctuation errors I've spotted, it doesn't necessarily interrupt with my reading still, that can be improved.

Overall, I love it!

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