Few errors here and there, could have spaced out a little more here and there. But otherwise I did enjoy it, it was very interesting to read, especially with the end. It was a little faced paced but as it was what happened before the present it's fine.Read the story now
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The story so far is really fantastic, the descriptions are stunning. I rated the plot a three as I am still setting up this world in my mind and I'm putting the pieces together. Zombies earn my approval and the grater? That sent chills up and down my spine, it was psychotically disturbing and beautiful. (Yes, I am odd... )
I don't think that I saw any issues with the grammer and puncatiation that shouldn't be there, I'm referring to the guys who sound like racist rednecks.
I will be looking forward to reading more.
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