Heather Jacobs

The Free City of Haringshude

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Beautiful

This story is so beautiful and sad at the same time. I lost my father last year and I absolutely feel for the main character.

Good job author!

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Interesting story!

I really enjoyed this story and it is refreshing to have a story with a religious component where the woman isn't an innocent doll with few real opinions of her own. My biggest criticism is that it didn't continue- I really want to see how they navigate the rest of their lives in such a harsh world!

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Great descriptions

I love the descriptions of this book. For once the main male character isn't unnaturally handsome and the female character isn't beautiful if perhaps a little curvy. Things aren't just pretty or ugly, they are graphic with dripping sweat and crusted blood. Very realistic!

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Interesting story!

Great story that captured my attention! Sometimes the main character seem annoyingly unaware, however it is explained by her father keeping her in the dark. I very much hope there will be a second book so we can find out more about Viktor's backstory :)

Great job author!

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Great book

I really enjoyed this book! I felt the desperation of the main characters to be together and I found the description of the mate bond very detailed. I generally liked the flow of the book and also that the minor characters had stories and personalities of their own.

I think my biggest critique is that the story feels incomplete, but am I right in guessing there will be a second book? If so, I would definitely read it :)

Great job author!

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Great book!

I really enjoyed this book and the mystery of Henry! I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys vampire books and I will definitely be reading the next book in the series.

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Wonderful story!

I really enjoyed this story- particularly the relationship between the two main characters! I also really enjoyed the world you created.
Perhaps I can suggest that there be a little explanation or justification (maybe just a paragraph or something) explaining why Dess flees when things get difficult rather than confronting Ly? She seems like the confrontational type, but maybe I missed something?
The epilogue has me very excited about the next book and I will definitely be checking it out. I look forward to reading more about Will.

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Cute story

This is a very cute romance, although my favorite part was the relationship between the sisters.

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Great adventure

This is a great adventure story. I just hope there is soon a second book !

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Great story.

It took me a few chapters to get into the first book, but now I am hooked on this story and can't wait to read more. I really enjoy the character and the world that they are situated in.

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Amazing book

This is an amazing book and story. The characters are fabulous and the plot is a really interesting twist on the whole vampire/werewolf story.

I really hope there is a second book coming.

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Dark but cute

I enjoyed this book a lot. It is dark in many parts with seriously abusive relationships, but it is something a little different for those days where you feel like something romantic but darker.

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Great plot

This is a great story, I really enjoyed the plot and could really associate with the characters. My only criticism is that the spell and grammar in the first half of the book is quiet poor, but this really improves with the second half!

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Intense!

This book is super intense! But I really like that it is not cliche and she doesn't give in to falling in love with an abusive man just because. Its refreshing to see someone really fight the "bond." Great job!

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Romantic story

I really enjoyed this story and the world in which it takes place. Its cute, short, and has its sexy moments. I look forward to reading more of this series!

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Excellent

I really enjoyed this story! It is sort of a detective story with a super natural twist. I also really enjoyed the characters who had realistic motivations and emotions that I felt I could really connect to. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more from you in the future!

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Hot

This story is hot!I don't know how the characters get anything done because they spend so much time having sex. Yet, the story still carries emotional weight and I can say that I truly enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Cute story

Sometimes you just want a cute story to read, and this story is perfect for it. It has elements of darkness to it, but it wasn't upsetting in any way, its mostly a charming love story. My only critique is that sometimes the text switches between first and third person which can be a bit confusing, But other then that, I would recommend this story.

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Great stories!

I really enjoy the world in which the story it takes place- even more than the characters which are themselves good. Once I started reading the stories, I found that I just couldn't put it down and read all three in about a day and half.

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Cute werewolf story

Sometimes I have to admit I just want a simple cute werewolf story. Nothing too dark and too depressing (so many stories involve abuse its crazy). This story is that- a cute love story that makes me smile. The characters are well developed and the plot moves along at a good pace. There are occasional awkward wording and grammar, but nothing you can't understand.

I look forward to reading the rest of the book!

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