HisDarkFae

She/Her 26, trying to exist in the world~ I’ve liked writing stories since I was a kid! I may not be professional or ever write a best seller, but it’s still something I enjoy doing and sharing!

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Great way to start!

Even in such a short time, I find myself interested in the cast of characters, whether they’re main or supporting! The plot itself is intriguing, mysteries lay ahead and that’s always my favorite kind of story~ I can’t wait to read more! It’s always a good sign when the first chapter is exciting~

Also, love the writing, definitely got a chuckle out of me with the “either get laid or see a shrink bit” at the start!

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Can’t wait for more!

I think it’s a great way to start a story! I find the analogies/metaphors of the train station deep. The character was immediately relatable, what with the constant reminder of needing to hide her true self and behave in class, pay attention, do-this-do-that! I can’t wait to read more, the writing style is great, the plot is intriguing, and just lovely all around!

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