My main page is on Wattpad under Hisoka_108 How many bubbles can a buffalo eat if a buffalo could eat bubbles? ~Always be willing to help Somone in need~ Love llamas and bread always

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Your story Is really good and I enjoyed it! Although You do need to practice a little more on how you explain things/describe things. Your pretty good at your punctuation and grammar you just need a little bit more practice but it shouldn't take long bc like I said you are really good at it! What I think might help with describing things is to ask google what's another word for 'Wet" for example and it would give you ' damp · dampened · moist · moistened · soaked · drenched · saturated · wet through. Ect. Once again this was a wonderful story I loved it so very much!

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