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Now I got to say, I'm not the type that usually reads these kind of stories, but this was a great story so far. You kept the romance clean not going too far especially when shawn was thinking of raina with her blue towel wrapped around her. He almost had a dirty thought but pushed that away before it gotten worse. It's good to do life lessons to show how the world is now nowadays, but not to where it will be over the top of showing the really bad things. Anywho, your story had great comedy, great bonds of friendship with one another, kindness towards others and I guess having self control over yourself of not letting your emotions or temptations get the better of you. I hope your story becomes great for all ages to enjoy
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