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I don't know what to say

I really liked the way you written it and mostly how goodly you described the suroundings hope I will be that good one day. Oh and if there would be chance to give you six and more starts I would be the first to do so. But I would recommend giving the characters more emotions. I know what you wanted to do with the style of the writting, but emotions are sometimes needed too. Hope I didn't sound too cruel. If yes then sorry.

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It is so good start I love the plot

I really like the plot so interesting, and I don't have anything that I would dislike. I would recommend it to everyone because it is so good that I can't wait till there will be another chapter.

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It is really good

I like Mia a lot, and I would recommend it to everybody but it is a little too fast for me everything else is just perfect.

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