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Brilliant

I've read some of LoweFantasys other stories and have also loved them. This one was great, it had good characters and an interesting plot.

My only fault with this story is that itcould have benefitted from a little more context and more elaboration on setting just to draw the reader in a bit more. However I did love reading it and it was written very well!

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Waiting for the next one

AMAZING! This story was fantastic, gripping the reader from the start to the finish. The author's writing style and descriptive skills of the characters, setting and plot were brilliant. Both serious and hilarious at times this story had me laughing out loud at Nerissa's sassy personality and Hadrian's clashing dark but mischievous one. Stories/books like this are rare to find and the only other thing I can say is will be impatiently waiting for the next book/story!

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