Horrorwriter13

Good plot!

I enjoyed the chapter a lot, being able to resonate with the main character, Opaline, being sometimes the forgotten child. Overall, the plot was amazing, and I would love to see a second chapter to this. Do we try to redeem the little sister? How does Opaline deal with her problems? Who is the Boy that comes into her life, suddenly but gradually lifting it from the shadows? I need to know, the suspense is killing me! I love your writing style, and appreciate the insight on Opal's problems. Thank you for taking the time to read this! (if you didn't, it doesn't matter, I appreciate it anyway!)