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Very interesting beginning

A good test for me when reviewing stories is getting into the story so much that I forget that I am reviewing it. This happened with this story. I also want to read more, which is another test.

It is a well-written, fast-paced story, where the science is woven into the telling so smoothly it takes a moment to realize we still don't have those in today's world.

However, I had a hard time at first because the primary character's names are almost identical, and I kept confusing them, having to go back and read something again, this time with the other character in my mind.

But, I very much look forward to reading more of this story.

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