Ibbonray

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Extremely Creative

I thought this was a wonderful synopsis. Your writing style was fantastic and I loved your interpretations of Benvolio, Mercutio, the Friar, and the Nurse. The idea of a day care and the coincidential deaths was amazing, and I was surprised to find this followed the original play very closely.
However, I would have liked to see Paris further incoporated, in one way or another.
Overall, well done.

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