Idrylla

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lovely

A beautiful farewell that had tears forming in my eyes. I would love to know what Dwalin would have said, but that might have been too heart-breaking and this was Balin's farewell. Sweet, sad and nicely written.

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A great twist on the tale

This was such a fun, interesting twist on the story. It fit in well into the established story, giving it its new twist while telling the old story at the same time. Such an interesting idea that the Doctor learns how to 'see' through is telepathic abilities. It was very well written and the story moved nicely. Well done! - Idrylla

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