verve

@Infectious_verve

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Good read

Enjoyed the story and writing style

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Good story, feels incomplete

The storyline is nice but can't call it a smooth or natural ending.

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Different story

Good & different story. enjoyed your writing style.

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Enjoyed

Nicely done

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Nice writing, good story

Nice writing, good story

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