IronBoom

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Good Job

This is a very good story so far. You have a very good plot that draws interest before the story is even read. You'r writing style is very good and over time will get even better, you are one of the few people who have the skill to take their writing far. I personally cannot wait until the next post, and i will be following this fanfic.

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